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SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Love this! Love how you set it out, beautifully done. Nice format too! QueenVixta
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Very nice - and very true too. Good luck with the last few weeks of your senior year (you lucky!)
meep2creep chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
you call this a poem i call it fancy but you are a cupcake on the top of my grandpappys head which he will eat for dessert and you smell like sassafrass
DementedOracle chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
This is written a lot like a song. I have a little trouble interpreting the message behind it. Is there spiritual inspiration here?
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
This is so beautiful Hawke. I've never read anything like it before and it really touched me. Great job my friend! _

Much love, Rosanna.