Reviews for Breakfast At Tiffany's
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
I polished some aluminum rims well,

With paste & brushes rubbing the 4 wheels,

Unusual, for I seldom know when,

My mood will unravel on cleaning's wend,

That is,—an urge to make things sparkle well;

So today, as I look at the old car,

I'm about to embark on to drive far,

Over concrete roads,—others with black tar,

I know I will pass accidents that jar,

& Those that entire lives will mar & char;

But, I leave in all my innocent joy,

For I have polished up my adult toy,

&, as I ready to this trip deploy,

I know choices other chances destroy,

& Since I am not going on convoy;

& I am not a playboy or cowboy,

& Well past being a hobbledehoy,

& Not looking for those that could employ,

I'll just wrap up in red paduasoy,—

& Pretend I'm a Viceroy or Tolstoy.

p.s. LOL. Ah promises! I live for them (sometimes.) But, I managed to find another poem to post on! So, there! m
beti213 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
simple and elegant. well done.
poisonous chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
aw.. damn.. that was short but so fuckin sweet.. kissing in the rain.. i love it!
estrela chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
:) this is really sweet! i love all the romantic scenes in the movies, and when they actually happen in real life it's so perfect.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
really beautiful image here, makes everything seem so perfect and just... right... well written x weasel within x
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Aw. This is cute. I really like the reference to Breakfast At Tiffany's... it shows how sometimes we can have a "picture perfect" moment. _ Nicely done.

~Daphne~
xHannahx chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
theres something amazing about a good kiss in the rain when nothing else matters. this sums that up brilliantly :)

Han.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Omg! This is so cute and amazing! Great job!

Much love, Rosanna.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
im so sorry ive fallen behind! im trying to catch up slowly with each author that matters! and lets just say that process begins bout right here! and btw; cool poem!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Aw...that's so sweet.
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
it's so short but so sweet...i love it! -
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
beautiful piece. very sweet. i like it.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
i bet you did...that scene sound adorable!

nice job

muchLUB-kerr
LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Ah so sweet, gt to love those old black and white films, nice idea.
myno chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
that's so sweet...
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