|Reviews for Breakfast At Tiffany's|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
I polished some aluminum rims well,
With paste & brushes rubbing the 4 wheels,
Unusual, for I seldom know when,
My mood will unravel on cleaning's wend,
That is,—an urge to make things sparkle well;
So today, as I look at the old car,
I'm about to embark on to drive far,
Over concrete roads,—others with black tar,
I know I will pass accidents that jar,
& Those that entire lives will mar & char;
But, I leave in all my innocent joy,
For I have polished up my adult toy,
&, as I ready to this trip deploy,
I know choices other chances destroy,
& Since I am not going on convoy;
& I am not a playboy or cowboy,
& Well past being a hobbledehoy,
& Not looking for those that could employ,
I'll just wrap up in red paduasoy,—
& Pretend I'm a Viceroy or Tolstoy.
p.s. LOL. Ah promises! I live for them (sometimes.) But, I managed to find another poem to post on! So, there! m
| beti213 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
simple and elegant. well done.
| poisonous chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
aw.. damn.. that was short but so fuckin sweet.. kissing in the rain.. i love it!
| estrela chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
:) this is really sweet! i love all the romantic scenes in the movies, and when they actually happen in real life it's so perfect.
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
really beautiful image here, makes everything seem so perfect and just... right... well written x weasel within x
| daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Aw. This is cute. I really like the reference to Breakfast At Tiffany's... it shows how sometimes we can have a "picture perfect" moment. _ Nicely done.
| xHannahx chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
theres something amazing about a good kiss in the rain when nothing else matters. this sums that up brilliantly :)
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Omg! This is so cute and amazing! Great job!
Much love, Rosanna.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
im so sorry ive fallen behind! im trying to catch up slowly with each author that matters! and lets just say that process begins bout right here! and btw; cool poem!
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Aw...that's so sweet.
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
it's so short but so sweet...i love it! -
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
beautiful piece. very sweet. i like it.
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
i bet you did...that scene sound adorable!
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Ah so sweet, gt to love those old black and white films, nice idea.
| myno chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
that's so sweet...