Reviews for Why or If
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Good question, nicely done.
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Bam, I liked this, very powerful and it's your face bastard kinda thing.

thank you for the review )
estrela chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
i prefer the title "why"; it seems fitting.

oh wow, this poem is so short, but it's so... perfectly written :) it's that feeling of not being ever enough... really well written _
xHannahx chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
i hate that feeling.
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
very very good and oh so true. personally, i prefer why :)
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Yeah, good question. Very good question. And awesomely written!

Much love, Rosanna.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
i dont think either title really does justice... i cant think of any better so ill shut up then! wonderful words!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Making my favorite list. Finally a poem that addresses this...
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
A need for maturity amongst our eternal youth, saddening how they act that way.
Tom Madden chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
nice one.. personally, i'd go with 'why'
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
don't you hate when people say something that is so without meaning? it sucks. anyway, this is nicely conveyed. good job. :)
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
very interesting...

short, yet directly to the point...

lov that question...!

nice job!


p.s. going on the faves
LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Ouch, very blunt, very good, i really like this.
myno chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
heck, how well i know how that feels! so well expressed.
indigotear-to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 4/20/2005 not sure i like why or If, but i think you should name it something like Her? up to you good poem n point
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