So good! This story feels true and unembellished, like if a relationship were to happen in reality, this is a possibility. Wonderful writing!

this is a wonderful story. kinda sad it left off, but it sort of ended in an open, redemptive sort of fashion, so I'm not horribly depressed.

Brett reminds me of ... me, so that was disturbing at points, and incredibly enlightening at others.

thanks so much for sharing! i hope you're still writing.

I am just... an emotional bloody wreck after reading this - in all the good ways. It's so moving.

OMG I found this story thru a link and I have fallen in Love with it .It was so hard for Brett to come to tearms with him being gay & was just so broken after telling his brother & best friend then to break up with Damien like that after.I was in tears .it seemed to me that they made up in the is what I am going to believe at least

I loved the story. Your characters were great and insightful and it was a good plot base.

How I wish the rest of this story had not been lost. How Ihope one day you feel like touching this story again. How I regret not reading it before it was erased. :(

So reading your new story put me in the mood for some of the ol' stuff. It feels like good original stories on Fp are harder and harder to find.

Keep writing, you really are good.

This one totally, totally adorable. Words fail me.

Oh my, I just loved this story. The characters are so very real, with faults and all:) Nothing cliche about it, which is so rare to find!

Great writing, I really felt for Damon, Brett, Jamie...etc and couldn't wait to see what happend next. No fairytales here, but something more true:)

So thank you for sharing and writing this.

Very sweet.

Hi. I've read just about all of your Damon/Brett/etc. stories, and I just had to tell you that they are amazing. I have found myself thinking about the characters, even when I'm not reading, and wondering how they would react in various situations. They are all so real and complex that I can't get enough! :) Anyway, I saw on your profile page that you had some technical difficulties with this story. I decided to be one of those somewhat annoying reviewers/fans and ask if you have anymore of it availabe? I'm guessing that you probably don't, or you would have posted it, but I thought I'd ask anyway. Thanks again for sharing your beautiful characters with us.

Happy writing,Sara

Well, I read ‘My Lover, Victor’ before this, thinking that since you didn’t have the end of this story, I wouldn’t read it… Well, as you see; I have read it! And it’s damn good! Too bad you don’t have the rest of it! Because I really would’ve liked to read more from Brett’s POV and what happens between Damon and him, how Brett’s parents reacts and all that… And how Jamie and Terry came to know each other, and how they reacts when they find out he has HIV! Well… I have read a little from ‘Brett & Michael’, I had to when I read Esquirella’s story, but I didn’t read the whole of ‘Brett & Michael’… But I liked the way you write and your characters so much that I thought I should read the stories before ‘Brett& Michael’ first… And that I then should read Brett & Michael again, and then review! Did you get any sense out of this? I really hope so!_ And I’ll stop my rambling now, and give you some peace!:p Haha! Yeah, anyway, I love your stories, they are DAMN, (Please excuse that), good!_

you'd put up that there are actually 30 chapters to this story I thought it was finished. But now my brain is like "What there's more? I want to read it! Goddamn it!"

So is there any chance of recovering the lost chapters?

I Love it and am adding you to my favorites list!

Another question: What is a doona?

I was curios to how Brett and Damon met. SO I went to ur profile to check if ther was a story about all the other stories tha I have read written by you I really enjoyed. A bit sad cuz I know how it all ends.