O, this is really great! You have a lot of blood in here, so, hopefully no one with a weak stomach reads this. *approving nod* I like this story very much. Though, you spelled, 'purpose' wrong in the first chapter. Also, in the first chapter when Soira was killing that old woman? I had was a bit confused on who was attacking who. Otherwise, I felt that you did a very good job! Keep up the good work! _

I like this story. Its kind of scary but in a good way and very interesting.