|Reviews for All for a Girl|
| Topazmunk chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
I ove it, maybe i get it more than other people since he is one of my so-so friends now. The poem makes sense. great job. That was amazing, yeah, so cool.
| katmufla chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
there were a lot of awkward phrases in this...so i'll just advise you to revise it, take out any unnecessary words and phrases that just don't fit. you repeat the same idea over and over...and sometimes that's ok, but to me it sounded dull. this situation reminds me of 7th grade. neat.