i like this story!

It's not good Chris ... ... Its Great.

Beautiful ... as old fogeys say, Isnt that right Morgan

Well what can i say? it's awesome perfect description and everything. all i can say is keep writing!. lol honestly it is very good

The story was good overall, and I think you should continue. The only problem I have with it is that you occasionally slip into present tense before returning to past tense. Stay in past tense.

Great. I thought chapter 5 was going to be good, but not that good. Brilliant.

I think it's going a bit too fast, but I love it! Can't wait to find out what happens next.

very good! i like it alot! hope my story will turn out as good as ur's going! -Shell

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! ITS AWSOME!

Interesting start, i like it

Havent got any critism or appraisals so yeah...

Update Soon.

Jorja : )

Excellent, as always. I especially liked chapter 1 and 3 ...

Sic EGO usitas write in latin. Sic quis. Quare operor populus planto a magnus paciscor ex is. Suus iustus alius lingua.

Good start I especially liked the history class. If only I'd been able to do that when I was in high school.

very inresting