It's been a while since your last update but this story sounds interesting. Hopefully there will be more.:-)

I think I've read this before... but it's been such a long time. Hopefully you update? :) Pretty please?

i reallly really like it please update!

i love it. a perfect opening

I miss this story so much!

Umm...are you going to update this? Cuz this is a HUGE cliffhanger for all of us readers to end on...ya...so

I hope you decide to update :)

Oh please update soon! I need to know what will happen next! :)

I see you haven't updated in a while, but this story is so interesting. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.

I read what you originally had written of this story before you removed it. I hope you plan to continue updating your revisions! I LOVE this story!

Okay...so I like the story and would love to know what the heck is going on! The main character, Rae, I think you've yet describe her appearance. She also seems kind of like an empty shell at this point. The idea is very good and really interesting, but I'd like to see more of it.

OH MY GOSH! you HAVE to update this story! I read it forever ago before you started re-editing it and LOVED it! However, I figured it was on permanent hiatus, as you hadn't updated in years. Now that you're updating it, I'm so excited! But now I'm worried since you haven't updated in about seven months... PLEASE don't give up!

- grace e. lane

Its cool to see this updated! This was one of the first stories I ever read on FictionPress...I thought it had been abandoned for sure. I'm looking forward to future updates!

plz plz continue it's so amazing thanks you!

love ya ( don't take it the wrong way )

Really like the story so far. Look forward to updates.

oh. my. goodness. I thought i had to give up this story.I'm so happy you're giving this story another shot! :)