|Reviews for Now That I'm With You|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Sweet, cute ending.
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
So that's a similie not a metaphor but hey. "pull me up and kiss my booboos." So I read this wrong. I loved the last verse although this line ruined it.
| Toni Berthelette chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
aw what a cute poem...:)
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
aww, that's so cute! ))
| xHannahx chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
yes! i am at that exact same stage! and so very happy. wishing you all the best,
| daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Aww. I love the picture you created. It's so cuute. _
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Beautiful. Really, really beautiful!
Much love, Rosanna.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
so cute! a nice little poem bout love. so sweet!
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
It's still cute...lol
| angelsstar chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
The beginning was a bit more serious but the last line made me laugh. It was sweet tho.
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
I like it, I like how it's written almost through the eyes of a child. Not sure about the last line - what's a booboo? *grins in an embarrassed way* QueenVixta
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
I think its romantically sweet...
| kazfuego chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
"you'll come to my rescuepull me up and kiss my booboos."Aw, that's cute! Reminds me of someone.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
It doesn't quite seem like a romantic poem, more so reminds me of a child. But not that it's bad, but it isn't your best. It's the metaphors fualt.
| Armas Apple chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
hehe!Hearing the word 'booboos' reminds me of my childhood...Great poem!Really describes a new relationship!