Reviews for The BATTLE!
TookyToucan chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
nice! i'm getting the feeling that there's more to this poem than just a monster vs. person battle.
strawberryblitz chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Wowzie.. I must say very depictive , it was like I was there watching this happen first hand... I enjoyed it !... KEEP WRITING :D
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Odd but good. Liked: 'rancid breath' foul but good.
margiegirl21 chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
This is different and cool. I really like it. Im me or email me at
Engrish chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
This is well done, but I know you could do better. I feel like you could have described things a little more. almost as if this is a rough draft. All in all a solid beginning on a poem.
Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Interesting, seems like it could be from an intense part of an epic poem. (I'm not accusing you of copying, it just had a serious tone). I enjoyed the precense of the beast in the literal and metaphorical sense in a struggle against life.