Reviews for War in Brief
Robert West chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
This was a pretty good poem maybe you should explane more about what really happens in the wars that are going on in the world today.
Michael McCarthy chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
This is a great poem!

Why must we spill blood just to conquer a goal given by some guy of higher power?

Anyway, great choice of words. Short and to the point. Good job
DeathsAngel13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
i think i get what you mean, my grandfather was in the army, korea, vietnam, and stationed like everywhere... for school we recently went to washington DC and all i could think about while at the vietnam memorial was : there are too many names here, how many did he(he being me grandfather) know. now anf forever, the sound of taps will always get to me... i think it would have meant more if it were a touch longer... but i liked it anyway
Capt J.E. Carrales chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Short but powerful! War is killing...maybe even murder. How can it be reconciled?

To sacrifice one's salvation so that others might be free, or saved?

A strange question...would a person damn themselves so others might be saved? Is there some of that in all war? Or at least the misconception of it?
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
cool. _

I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Hm, good point to be made here - but it may be more affective if you made it a tiny bit longer. Well, ciao for now! *waves*