Reviews for Disjointed Love Story
Capt J.E. Carrales chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
It s nice to know that there are still some people that regard a "failure" as a hope of success. Maybe, as you suggest, and exodus to success. No destination was ever reached without a road. The road to success may be paved with "Stillborn hopes."

Buring love will do that. Not merely tear the heart; but burn it in that holocaust of which you speak and throw the ashes to the hollow winds.

I don't quite follow the last stanza, what is recieved? Is it confusion?