|Reviews for Love me broken|
| Kitten973 chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
heartwrenching. short, but im a fan of short, despite my verbosity. i love your juxtapositions, everyone is chilling, an oxymoron, like loving hate and hating love. confusion and hurt. and the pleading despite the demanding tone. endearing.
| The Rain's Kiss chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
NOw this was a good poem. Even with only 25 words, it created a vivid emotion in me, not a picture, but an emotion. It made me feel and see emotions. It was interesting and the spacing of it contributed to the poem's meaning very well, great job.
| kit feral chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I LOVE the format for this. It’s so short, but so sweet and powerful. I LOVED the last stanza- it was so beautiful. You’re work is so emotional and beautifully written. I really love it. You’re seriously one of the best poets here I’ve come across. Great work, keep it up!
| WiredWords chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
damn. you're good.
i mean, you're REALLY good.
| ShadowNemesis chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Short, but so profound and powerful! Beautifully written.
| my failure chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
this is so just awsome!
| KerriRane chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
wow. I loved it. It is soo good. Short, but good.
| revertedautumn chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
so simple and yet so profound.
| Rocky G chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Very cool writing I really enjoyed it.
| something agaisnt you chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
what a fantastic poem with such an interesting layout, i really like it.
| lisaslife chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Wow, thats beautiful.
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
very touching and heartfelt. I love the flow and the passion to it...great work!
| lonelytourist chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
i love this poem it flows so well and great format. i love your writing!
| ambiguityy chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
awesome descriptions and I love the flow and rhythm of the poem.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Wow... awesome write! Thank ya for the reviews.