Reviews for Love me broken
Kitten973 chapter 1 . 8/10/2005

heartwrenching. short, but im a fan of short, despite my verbosity. i love your juxtapositions, everyone is chilling, an oxymoron, like loving hate and hating love. confusion and hurt. and the pleading despite the demanding tone. endearing.

kitten xx
The Rain's Kiss chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
NOw this was a good poem. Even with only 25 words, it created a vivid emotion in me, not a picture, but an emotion. It made me feel and see emotions. It was interesting and the spacing of it contributed to the poem's meaning very well, great job.
kit feral chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I LOVE the format for this. It’s so short, but so sweet and powerful. I LOVED the last stanza- it was so beautiful. You’re work is so emotional and beautifully written. I really love it. You’re seriously one of the best poets here I’ve come across. Great work, keep it up!
WiredWords chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
damn. you're good.

i mean, you're REALLY good.
ShadowNemesis chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Short, but so profound and powerful! Beautifully written.

my failure chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
this is so just awsome!
KerriRane chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
wow. I loved it. It is soo good. Short, but good.
revertedautumn chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
so simple and yet so profound.
Rocky G chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Very cool writing I really enjoyed it.

Rocky :)
something agaisnt you chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
what a fantastic poem with such an interesting layout, i really like it.
lisaslife chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Wow, thats beautiful.
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
very touching and heartfelt. I love the flow and the passion to it...great work!

lonelytourist chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
i love this poem it flows so well and great format. i love your writing!
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
awesome descriptions and I love the flow and rhythm of the poem.
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Wow... awesome write! Thank ya for the reviews.

Needa S.
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