|Reviews for Song of Summer|
| constantly bummed chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
i liked it. It's not my flow, neither would i pick that as a topic, but i totally liked the way you put your piece together. With a real event like that, i have a hard time writing poems or stories like that.
| ifitaintkatie chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
That was cute, hehe. Good work. Maybe you could describe the setting a little better, but maybe not... it seems like you're more focused on your friends. Which is good. But keep in mind that nobody reading this knows who they are, so maybe describe them a bit more. Otherwise, nice work! Maybe you could review something of mine if you have the time? Thanks!