| Reviews for Nicole's Stupid Diary |
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   Erisah Mae chapter 19 . 9/27/2007 "“Chris, why’re you so quite all of a sudden?” " Okay, here the word should be "quiet" as in "a mouse is quiet" not "quite" as in "it was quite a surprise actually, Mildred". This story is very cute, and other than a few little grammar points, so far so good :) |
| Erisah Mae chapter 17 . 9/27/2007 Aw, why didn't you leave it set in the Phillipines? I get so sick of reading about American teens from Oklahoma or wherever. A foreign setting would have set this story apart. As it was, I liked the fact that the characters weren't all caucasian. |
| Erisah Mae chapter 9 . 9/27/2007 Hi, it's me nitpicking again. "I slept really late night,” I smiled at him sweetly but I knew he sensed the venom in my smile." Did you miss a word in that sentence or something? Otherwise, loving the progression ;) Erisah |
| Erisah Mae chapter 8 . 9/27/2007 This is very cute, but you made a slight word switch in the phrase: "you have a lot of time left with Christopher before I still him away"... in the context, I think you meant to write "steal". Ciao, Erisah |
| palmsaresweaty chapter 18 . 8/14/2007 YOU CHAnged thier last names...it was chris ho and trisha chu before. |
| Singers To The Back chapter 28 . 8/5/2007 Oh my, hahaha. That Britney Spears thing was genious ! xd |
| Singers To The Back chapter 7 . 8/5/2007 How cute! (: |
| monkey08 chapter 29 . 8/2/2007 this has go to be the best story I've ever read.. i laughed ,i cried ,and i even got mad...but in the end i was crying and laughing even when they put on " oops i did it again" i was laughing to no end ahahah. but really that was awesome ..that was...the best story ever! |
| SapphireEyes16 chapter 29 . 7/28/2007 i luv this story keep up the gud work! |
| sfasfafasfasf chapter 29 . 7/5/2007 I thought it was really good, but in the end it got really corny.. |
| xjennnny chapter 29 . 6/2/2007 i loved it. it was so freakin awesome! ] the end was funny too. i loved the ...I'm dumping him tonight. that as hilarious. my favorite part was him singing ops! i did it again by brittney spears. btw r u odignn a sequel? it would be awesome if u did cause ur story nd characters r freakin awesoem lol] |
| i-like-music chapter 29 . 5/31/2007 Sweet:) |
| PanicAttack757 chapter 29 . 5/24/2007 yeah, i know you finished this a while ago, but i still wanted to review and tell you that i LOVE it! at the end, when she said "i'm dumping him tonight" i was like what? no! but i loved the ending! it was really good! i love it! |
| MeZzeDUpGuRL chapter 29 . 5/21/2007 Its cool, its cool! It's cliche, but hell, that's how life goes! Cliches! And i liked how you finished it. Filipino-es rock, yes? Hehe. -Jessi |
| Lavender-Drop chapter 29 . 4/16/2007 this was really cute! though, Myra is 13 and Matt 18... erm...ano i really liked it and Nicole was awesome! i LOVED how she headbutted Chris instead of the stereotypical 'anger induced kiss' that made me really happy, I think I laughed for a full five minutes… thanks! |