Reviews for Toxic Kisses
Kingdoms chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Very Nice
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I like the analogy. It was really well-thought out. Keep on writing!
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
This is wonderful... I can completely relate to how that feels... You should R&R some of my poems sometime!
whitewave1191 chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
this was excellent, except on the twelth line it should be "Brighter than the sun" or "More bright than the sun" not "More brighter than the sun". Just trying to help out! This isn't a flame or anything. But honestly, other than that, it was awesome.
DementedOracle chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Oh yes! I'm pleasantly surprised by this poem. I love how open-ended it is; it lets the imagination have a go. It's the beginning of something very sweet, though a complete work in itself.
Infection chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
execellant, well written.