Reviews for Toxic Kisses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the analogy. It was really well-thought out. Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderful... I can completely relate to how that feels... You should R&R some of my poems sometime! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was excellent, except on the twelth line it should be "Brighter than the sun" or "More bright than the sun" not "More brighter than the sun". Just trying to help out! This isn't a flame or anything. But honestly, other than that, it was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yes! I'm pleasantly surprised by this poem. I love how open-ended it is; it lets the imagination have a go. It's the beginning of something very sweet, though a complete work in itself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() execellant, well written. |