|Reviews for substance is lacking|
| Prevaricate chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Nice. This has almost a prose-like feel to it, and the last line is cool. The easy flow of it keeps the reader interested, unlike some poetry I've read on this site.
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
gah! fucking amazing.
| SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I love it! The first two lines resonated very deeply with me. A very fascinating and beautiful poem.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
I can't believe I'm the favorite of such a writing goddess like yourself. your sentences, so rightly long but they never trip over themselves. "a dazzling new sympathy for the symphony." THAT will ring in my head. forever.
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Awesome, I love it! KEEP WRITING!
| deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
This is well confusing, cuz I don't know what it's really about. It's well written and deep, though.
| youzi chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I have no idea what this is about but it sounds interesting..i liked 'intoxicated disregard' (i think i like most things that are intoxicated/poisoned..in poetry, that is,no idea why) I enjoyed this piece. Do keep writing D
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
ah your poetry is excellent. definatly adding you to my favorites and keep writing :D
| twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
wonderful. just wonderful.
| i was a postcard chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Every single line of this is so full of broken life. Can I tell you again how much I love you? I wanna grow up and be just like you.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
interesting.. i like it