Reviews for Guilt without Redemption
Daemone Angelus chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Bravo. I really enjoyed this piece. And to have such a dramatic and climactic ending. beautifully written.
gabriellafaith chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
That's good, personal, I can tell. I like your style of writing. Can you rr some of mine? Try A Still Cold Night. It really isn't even like your style of writing, but I think you might like it. Thanx! -gabriellafaith
fabiola chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
I really loved the ending.
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I love this poem up until the 8th line. The rest is good too, but all that white knight stuff just doesn't appeal to me. chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Wow, I love the tone of this piece, and how it seems like it's back in medieval times. The vision of this poem is so crisp, and it's just wonderful. Wow, I am impressed.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
wow, very powerful use of words~~ Reli nice~ Great work!

keep writing!
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
OO wasn't expecting that! The way you created this piece is amazing and beautiful. I liked the last line and the title.


Thank you for all over your reviews! I can't keep up! : P I especially want to thank you for your review on "Full Moon's Light" werewolves and vampyres are the best : D lol
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
beautifully written. u crafted ur poetry so well, the details and all. i luv this! )
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
wow. you're a really good poet! _ great job!

THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
"contrite smile", such irony! This painted quite a picture...good job.
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Powerful piece of work. I like every single line, the tragedy is well potrayed. Good job here.
arachibutyrophobia chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
ur really really REALLY good with just sounded really mature, if u know what I mean. really strong imaes and emotions, the last line was amazing. eh, i'll be thinking about it for the rest of thie evening ::shudders:: its so sad!
angelxinxaxnightmare chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
that was awesome! very well written
Randall K chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Wow! I think its' time for you to publish! not joking.

ever thought of a book for short stories and poems? and than some longs ones too

Disturbed Cherry chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
i LOVED THAT. especially the last five lines, so powerful..! definately on my favourite stories list.
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