|Reviews for Fourth|
| hey maria chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Something about this is immensely powerful. The theme of numbers, the structure, your diction. Adored "ZEROpetals left on my forget-me-not." And the last three lines are a wonderful ending.
| kawaii-kiwi chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
oh i like it! not your typical love poem...
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
i liek teh whole number thign except that it goes 4 5 & then down.. I also like the ending