Reviews for Mostly First
tawnyfawn chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Well written and captures what I imagine to be the nervousness of a first date (even if it's not the first) perfectly. It was nice, and short 'n' sweet! Keep it up!

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Writing-Faerie chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Awesome start..I enjoyed it and I'm pretty picky about stories. But there's something the man char a girl or a boy? At first I thought it was a girl b/c it says she went out with people called christopher and marshall..well, but then-the person she's going out with is a's a she..and the girl that he/she's going out with says she is beautiful. Then it's a girl again. I am totally confused! other than that, great job, can't wait till you update!