Well written and captures what I imagine to be the nervousness of a first date (even if it's not the first) perfectly. It was nice, and short 'n' sweet! Keep it up!

from fawny

Awesome start..I enjoyed it and I'm pretty picky about stories. But there's something confusing..is the man char a girl or a boy? At first I thought it was a girl b/c it says she went out with people called christopher and marshall..well, but then-the person she's going out with is a girl..it's a she..and the girl that he/she's going out with says she is beautiful. Then it's a girl again. I am totally confused! other than that, great job, can't wait till you update!