|Reviews for Maniac Vampire|
| Nelson Wells chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
By your description, I expected something insane. This is the same boring stuff that so many angsty teens write about. Someone laughing at mutilation is cliche. There is no description that makes me think "oh wow". I've heard all of this before.
Spice it up with some originality and subtleness (note that subtly and vagueness are not synonomous). I really like vampire poems, so work on this one and maybe it will be something great.
| Hercules chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Sadist!'The screams brings me pleasure, And I laugh at their pain.' *Shudders* Immediately sets me in the dark mood. Good job!