|Reviews for On the Pharaoh's Camel
| Rain chapter 5 . 6/26/2016
I love it
And I love u
| FoxFire45 chapter 15 . 9/25/2012
So it has been a while since you have updated..it happens lol. I just want to let you know that I really enjoy this story. This is the second time I have read the chapters. Ramses and Ellianne relationship is very fun to read. It is nice to see Ellianne being okay with her feeling toward Ramses. He is so much better then her husband. Looking forward to the next update :D
| Tru3Blood chapter 15 . 10/8/2011
i love this story, it has great characters and an amazing plot! i hope you continue with this story! :) :)
| AmazinqlyyChaoticx3 chapter 10 . 9/19/2009
LOVE THIS STORY.! :D
what does castrate mean aqain.?
i completely forqot what it means. :p
but love it.! (;
| paradiie chapter 15 . 7/14/2008
i seriously love this story.
and i can't wait for the next one to come out.
| M.Bianca chapter 15 . 3/24/2008
you have to finish this! I want to know how it ends! think about your fans, all the poor people waiting for the next chapter...
| nikki chapter 15 . 3/4/2008
update please! finish it for me! please!
| uusernname chapter 15 . 6/24/2007
Please finish this story? Submit it to your new account or whatever but please finish it! It's fab.
| Gewher chapter 15 . 6/3/2007
Urm, hello? -waves frantically- Are you still alive? If you are, and you find yourself with half a heart, you'd continue this story. Just for me? Please? It's awesome, and well, I absolutely love Kaarik, as in the sarcastic goat herder, I kind of miss the old him, now that he's become pharoah he seems to have lost his amazing personality. I say that he and Ellianne run away together, into the desert with nothing but goats, dogs, and each other to keep them company. That would be awesome, hey! Amseth could become pharoah! hehe, so much for an heir but he'd make a good leader! It's really sad what happened to him when he was younger, man I really feel bad for those little slave boys! It'd be like having Michael Jackson as an owner! Anyway, you really must keep up the good work!
PS: I like how you've not put explicit sex in this, especially since most people seem to think that to have gay people in a story, there must be sex between them. I find this highly annoying as that is not what relationships, between either gay or straight, should be about. I mean it is a part of it all, but it's not the only thing. You've done a good job conveying this, and I really like it!
| awestruck4 chapter 15 . 4/22/2007
wow! I like this story the best out of all your other ones :) It's definitely addicting for me since I can't seem to stop myself hehe anyhow, one of the strengths of your story is your plot-it continues to heighten & become more intriguing. I also really am enamored with the characters you've developed. However, you might want to consider revising because some sentences are illogical where you wrote one character's name but meant another. All in all, keep up your very original, well-spun story! I eagerly anticipate your next update !
| FrenzyFan78 chapter 15 . 12/14/2006
Okay. I really like your story, but there's a few things that I think would make it better. For one, I've noticed a lot of inconsistancies in names and descriptions. I know you spelled Marcus "Markus" a few times, and once said that Leon had golden eyes instead of gray. Little things like that that could easily be fixed by some editing. Another thing is that I find some things that happen quite unrealistic, like Ramses leaving to go find Ellianne. Realistically, he probably wouldn't be able to because the people of Egypt would stop trusting him, especially since he was in hiding for so long, and they'd start looking for someone to replace him. Unless that's still coming. I don't know, it's something to think about. I do like how you pay attention to a lot of your characters instead of simply focusing on Ellianne and Ramses, which seems to be a problem with a lot of romantic stories. I also enjoy how you don't spend excessive amounts of time describing things that aren't necessary to hear about, like clothing. You give good enough descriptions so the reader can imagine what you're imagining, but don't over-do it. Good job.
Anyway, you should think about updating again sometime soon. Since it's been awhile.
P.S. - What does the title of the story have to do with the story? I don't recall there ever being a camel...
| izzy-bh chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
It's been a while since an update. I stumbled across your author account and have read 2 of your completed stories. THey're fantastic! I'm not sure whether you've given up but just dropping a review to let you know that you have an eager reader waiting!
| cherryblossom88 chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Wow! This story is awesome! Im hooked! Please update as soon as possible!
| crystal chapter 15 . 9/26/2006
please... update... you are so killing me...
| serenitylovegod chapter 15 . 9/12/2006
oh my god I absoulutely love the story. I just read all 15 chapters today and I was captivated. I cannot wait for the next chapter.