Your great author and people love your poems, and I'm one of those people! There is something that I want you to read, it's called Sokato: Green Police Officer, would you read it?

*checks fav story box* HOLY FUCK THAT WAS SO FUCKEN AWESOME! IT CAPTURES EXACTLY WHAT IVE BEEN TRYING TO WRITE FOR A FEW DAYS NOW! those 2 poems i posted, memory and dead, they are trying to get that *points at ur poem* out... yeah wonderful eh *rolls eyes* lol! i LOVED this so MUCH! really is powerful, insightful and magnificent! i just LOVE LOVE LOVE it! it just... wow. its what i wanted to get out but u did! wow! ok imma shut up... bye!

wow, love the angst. lots of ppl def feel this way...so do i sometimes. good work!

Wow, this is really stong, i like the idea of the dots. The plastic smile imagery is brilliant, and the last stanza is really good.

wow very dramatic and scary-scary to believe a human can think that way. i hope it's just a poem and nothing else, but if u wanna talk u have my email i like the poem tho the lines are cool reminds me of a creed song

Know the feeling...not nice being on the brink. Nice job!

That's a nice format, I like it with the dots and all.

too powerful a i think our minds are like balloons. If they get to filled with thoughts and we can't find someone to talk to who will listen we .

_ I really liked this. The format was really neat and original. Very cute.

!~* Noelle *~!

the middle I can definiteltly understand.I loved the last two lines!

nice work! and really unique placing of your words! keep writing! ah. simple plan rocks.