Reviews for Lost
tears-of-innocence chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
I love it. I love the rhyming. And i love the tv show lost! but i really like this poem as well.
Nestegg chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Now this one I don't understand - not all of it. Lost from God or lost from the world. I still like it as I put my own thoughts into it.
this is britt chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
I liked this. never have watched the TV show (isn't Dominic Monaghan on that? lol, he's hot) but I really liked this poem. I loved it.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Lovely rhyme and rhythm with rich meaning.
mormonboy chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
I really like the it is awesome. It expresses being alone quite so well and how depressing it is. It is amazing how when we are in our down moments is when we can feel god's love best and it lifts us up off the ground.
Viva En La Eskabar chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Awesome. Could be a song, maybe we could work on that! _ keep it up... and where's that next Insanity chapter?
tsym chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Very good. It has a great flow.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
I've never seen the TV show. But, I think you're poem is more than that. Its about modern life and how we all are lost!
Skiv chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
THAT rocks! I think it's going on the list of things that get transfered to parchment type paper and hung on my wall. Nice rhyming job, it's not forced.

~Skiv
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Excellent message. Keep'em coming. God Bless!

Needa S.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
wow, awesome poem! very powerful and effective!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
I loved the way you used the rhythmn and rhyme so effectively. Nicely done!