|Reviews for Circle in the Sand|
| RezMary chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
| Major General chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
This is obviously the best work I have written in my 2 days at fiction press. You have a talent. I thought I was nice, you might even be better than me. You should continue and work harder. I also had a fixed style of poetry, and you have made me think about using more than just one style. I thought changing my words helped, it did, but I should also change my format.