Reviews for I went to buy a car
Chi Ame chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Hehe, this one is quite charming. With its schizophrenic-ness and all! Great job, once again.
S.S.Harry chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
hehe. Didn't make much sense so I will pretend you're scitzophrenic. :)
Frketic chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
you must really like this whole "schizophrenic, conscious/subsonscious" thing you have going on in everything you write now. i like it, except that i had to read over it a few times to be able to see the rhyme, and then see the subconscious talking.
Amora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Swool. I like it a lot. The whole two person side thing is really cool. New perspective. and it was yeah back to back but they bounced off each other and that really seemed to work.