Reviews for Escape
Finn Kaysen chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
This story was deeply romantic and painfully emotive of the lust and sweetness contained in a deeper relationship. It was very real, gritty and human, and yet it refused to abandon all notion of eloquence and romanticism. This is sometime you could check out some of my work...I would greatly appreciate some input from someone as well versed in fiction writing as you clearly !
Sundown chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I am really liking this. I love the descriptions of the previous lovers and the listing of them. The predicament this guy is in seems so usual...i love it! well done