Reviews for The Dark Lord
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
This was excellent. I loved the description of the dark lord at the beginning, the various theories on him , and the way you made us care about the so called bad guy. The twist at the end was brilliant and at the same time sad. Am I the only one who feels sorry for the Dark Lord here? You set this out perfectly and it was easy to read. You spelt two words wrong but apart from that I can't find anything to crique. Well done. Luv Kaitx
Accalia Aeryn chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
I thought this was a great story. A few spelling errors here and there. I thought the description and explaining was great!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
not much, except you may have made him sound a bit too perfect in a few paragraphs. other then that, I think this was a very intelligiant read. nicely written and a bit twisted, which was really nice since I like such twists. the relationships between the brothers seemed so real in my eyes and gave them a more three dimentional feel then anything else. nicely done. may be a bit of polishing but other then that it was astounding.

* noelle
MexicanGirl chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
great story. kinda messed up what the brothers did. you explained what was happining very well and that made it easier for me to up the great work