Reviews for Innocent Desires |
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![]() ![]() I love this story! The plot is great and I can't wait to read more! I wonder if the guy placing the cloak on Aeries is the Lord or someone else... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, you're mean, you are very mean! How could you just stop? AFter writing a cliffy nonetheless? CONTINUE THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BOW CHICKA WOW WOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is marvelous!Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you will continue this story it is really good, i hope you did not give up on it or anything happened to you. |
![]() ![]() till this far this story's gr8 but it been a long time seens u've updated..did u give up this this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shut up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah... I have an innocent desire... a desire for you and for you to update this site! Love from Divad |
![]() ![]() ![]() love your stories please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i did enjoy it! A bit late, perhaps, for a review, but I really liked it! Please update soon, continue with the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have to update! This is a really ood story! pplleeaassee?D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good plot! Update, please! I am curious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do update for me please. It was just geting good! Oh please continue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...this story is so good! i love Van Husen...he's just so...well written...great job.. |
![]() ![]() I highly suggest that you find a beta reader - someone to edit your work before you post it. Your story has good potential, but the grammatical errors are distracting from the story itself. |