|Reviews for Broken Shattered Remains|
| putz-6 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
This is an amazing poem I love it _
| Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
It doesn't bother me any! Your works are delightful to read.
The message in this one was fantastic!
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
this is dark and sad...but so great..I love the flow and the emotions to this. There's just so much truth and reality to it.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
so sd.. and beautifully written.. awesome chorus... thanks for your review
| R.Valaina chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Beautiful but sad, keep it up!
| Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Oh wow. Beautiful. So descriptive. So sad. So, so sad.
| Kenesis X chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I really, really like this one...
I like the part where u describes the piece of glass going thru her, great word choice good repitition i wish u lived near me we'd make a band haha
I play guitar and u could sing ; )
Very Strong words, keep up the good work
| BluesCloud9 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
It seems a bit bland. You need to go a little deeper and use a greater vocabulary. It needs a tiny bit more but it was okay work on it and it will be better.
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I love it! It seems like a bit of a lullaby. Only thing is that one or two of your lines didn't quite flow, but other than that it's terrific. Listening to MCR right now and they are kickin ass! ANYWAY, great job and keep writing!