Reviews for In another life I was a dove
Hellenic Pride chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
Beautiful, and painful. Your words are so moving.
DarkPharaoh1666 chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
Very well done, a flow of words.
Rai' Natia chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
I really enjoyed reading this poem, much like the rest of your work that I have read. You are a great writer..
dancingintheshadows chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
This is really beautiful. I especially like the last three lines.

dancingintheshadows
cake-is-good chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
This really shows that love will have its ways. Very nice work
Alphonse C. LaRue chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
I nearly cried when I read this. It's so beautiful. Godspeed, Juliet.A. C. LaRue
Stassney chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
again ... all i can say is that im pretty much speechless
KeishaAnkhMaKainn chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Keisha MaKainn: "First off I'd likke to thank you on your copmlement on my poem 'Insanity'. Now, I would like to comend you on a wonderful job you are also doing on your work as well. Thanks again and I'll try to work on some of the lighter side if life. Keep up the good work, and may peace be with you on your journey threw life."
addie pray chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Lovely. The line you used in the summary was awesome, one of my favourites, along with "bit back the cry of hate to fall freely from his eyes". For critism, I didn't think that the repetition of "I gave my cry...I gave my cry to him" really fit well. Overall, this was great. Well done.
Jo Madden chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
This is so sweet! It's so romantic. It really is good. You need to keep this up. And sorry for not reviewing earlier.

JB Madden
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
awesome metaphor