Reviews for Violet Eyes
Aiylithe chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Aw...so sweet. The only thing was, as it seems everyone else has said, the story, though, and interesting twist at the end...
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
very touching... I liked the story and the twist at the end. The dialogue is a bit too formal, though - as if it was written down instead of spoken spontaneously. Great story!
dillpickleem21 chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
i liked this alot...the plot and characters and everything...but i think the dialoge needs a little work and i was confused about one thing. you said that rachel had been diagnosed with breast cancer and, that same day, chris rushed to her death bed. can you die so quickly from breast cancer? if you can, i never job and keep writing these short-not-so-short stories, i like them the best!
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
no i think it was a good story. i was kind of confused at the end though- about the relationship between rachel and chris. was she his mother or aunt? well i liked it!