Reviews for Quid Pro Quo
twibbit chapter 25 . 11/23/2013
Takemeaway chapter 25 . 2/28/2012
Honestly I don't really like this story. It has some good qualities, but it also has a lot of bad ones.

First, Nora's kind of a Mary sue. I haven't really seen a genuine personality for her. Also your story is really jumpy. It doesn't really have a solid plot. You jump from one thing to the next and then act as if the last thing never happened.

You have potential to be a good writer but this story just isn't working.
DorkExpress chapter 25 . 10/10/2011
Who does she love! Randy? And why the hell is Gidion being all moody and PMSing on her? Is it because he feels guilty?

6 years is a long time chapter 25 . 2/14/2011
Wow, you haven't updated in a while. I really like this story. You should keep writing.
About your cat chapter 3 . 2/14/2011
Ah...this is kinda awkward but the cat, it's named Aryan. Like Hilter likes the Aryan race kinda yeah
Liya Smith chapter 25 . 10/21/2009

i liked this. a lot. ugh. there's an overpopulation of lady bugs (or asian ladybird beetles?) where i live and now i'm paranoid that they're in my room. yeah.
Kimberly Beckwith chapter 25 . 6/27/2009
Wow its really good i hope to read more to see who she will be with!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 25 . 4/19/2008
abc1234 chapter 18 . 12/16/2007
I don't get it! What is he apologizing for? Ek they kissed! Yay!
pete's sake delete the account chapter 7 . 12/7/2007
Hey! I like the story so far, but one question: Wasn't Gideon supposed to have a nonnegotiable swim meet during this chapter?
Dragonette12 chapter 25 . 8/5/2007

i luv ur story! and i kno the last time you updated was 2 years if u get this message, if u feel like it that is, could u finish the storie? i would be really happy if u wud and if u don't thats kewl i mean u prob can't b bothered finishing it yea i luv ur writing style by the way :)
Rikayla chapter 3 . 5/18/2007
LOLOL! This cracked me up: "The parlor. This house has a parlor. I thought those were extinct along with the dinosaurs and the red phone booths of England."

You've got a great sense of humour and this looks like it'll be with a great plot and some great characters too. :D *thumbs up*
siddika chapter 25 . 2/13/2007
i adore this story.
pleasebequiet chapter 25 . 1/28/2007
man... gid's her 4th cousin? it would be much better if randy was. doesnt it sound weird that you kissed your 4th cousin? UPDATE soon!
Mikey chapter 25 . 11/26/2006
Ohmygod, ohmygod, the plot THICKENS! It's like some...thing that thickens! Like BUTTER! Or something..

Anyways, how could Gideon be so cold? What's his damage? PMS? Aha, just kidding.

Lovely story. Truly.
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