Reviews for Quid Pro Quo |
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![]() ![]() Honestly I don't really like this story. It has some good qualities, but it also has a lot of bad ones. First, Nora's kind of a Mary sue. I haven't really seen a genuine personality for her. Also your story is really jumpy. It doesn't really have a solid plot. You jump from one thing to the next and then act as if the last thing never happened. You have potential to be a good writer but this story just isn't working. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who does she love! Randy? And why the hell is Gidion being all moody and PMSing on her? Is it because he feels guilty? XOXO |
![]() ![]() Wow, you haven't updated in a while. I really like this story. You should keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Ah...this is kinda awkward but the cat, it's named Aryan. Like Hilter likes the Aryan race kinda name...so...uh yeah |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty. i liked this. a lot. ugh. there's an overpopulation of lady bugs (or asian ladybird beetles?) where i live and now i'm paranoid that they're in my room. yeah. |
![]() ![]() Wow its really good i hope to read more to see who she will be with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() tHE STORY WAS GOING SO WELL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get it! What is he apologizing for? Ek they kissed! Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I like the story so far, but one question: Wasn't Gideon supposed to have a nonnegotiable swim meet during this chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi i luv ur story! and i kno the last time you updated was 2 years ago...so if u get this message, if u feel like it that is, could u finish the storie? i would be really happy if u wud and if u don't thats kewl i mean u prob can't b bothered finishing it neways...so yea i luv ur writing style by the way :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOLOL! This cracked me up: "The parlor. This house has a parlor. I thought those were extinct along with the dinosaurs and the red phone booths of England." You've got a great sense of humour and this looks like it'll be with a great plot and some great characters too. :D *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i adore this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man... gid's her 4th cousin? it would be much better if randy was. doesnt it sound weird that you kissed your 4th cousin? UPDATE soon! |
![]() ![]() Ohmygod, ohmygod, the plot THICKENS! It's like some...thing that thickens! Like BUTTER! Or something.. Anyways, how could Gideon be so cold? What's his damage? PMS? Aha, just kidding. Lovely story. Truly. |