Oh my god! I have that shirt! Except mine's pink, and no one ever gets it. Geez, has NO ONE played Oregon Trail? Well, other than COOL people, that is.

Why would you be shocked? Why wouldn't we? Anywho. I still think it's kind of sudden for Nora to have such strong feeling for Randy. It never hinted at anything, and at most, it hinted towards Randy having feelings Nora may not reciprocate. I like that she has a way out of the incestuous relationship with the jerk wad, but everything seems so sudden. He wasn't the rude or snappish before the accident, nor did Nora show signs of this attraction.

maybe im stupid or something haha but im totally lost, so who does nora love?and why doesnt lucien have a mum, and why does gideon not love his brother?like i said totally lost

i like this a lot so far.

its really excellent, and i have to say, so far, its prolly one of the best stories ive read on fp

Sorry it took me so long to review!

I liked Randy using the claw to make her feel better. That's a fun movie.

Livi

aww

if nothings dead, can you update soon?

pretty please?

is..this..done?

um...maybe it's just me...but i'm really confused about the whole Prescott bloodline and Lucian and Gideon...but overall, i really like the story...update soon :D

I liked it; please try and review soon!

-Chisu

heya, this is great. i can't wait for more to see what happens. cya later.

Ok so I just now got around to finishing your story. I'm lazy, I know.

I absolutely love that it has twisted around to where she realizes that she loves Randy. Talk about unexpected. While I love Gid, I think Randy is a more stable guy for her just because he's not so wishy-washy about her.

Please update sometime in the near future because I don't know how long I can wait to see what happens!

Simply smashing, lovey! I love Gideon because he's rather enigmatic (as well as being eccentric), Nora because she's lovely and artistic and Randy because, well, he's always there for her. Nice and dependable. Keep writing!

-Fire's Child

LOVE the story!...and why wouldn't anyone review?

I've gotten this far and I'm already deeply intrigued. I'm anxious to find out where the whole Gideon and Nora thing is going. I like the way you write. It's easy to follow and not annoyingly superior. You might check out my story "Fate Working Title" since it's kind of along the same lines. You don't have to if you don't want to. Keep writing because this is awesome.