Reviews for Quid Pro Quo
Carbon Slash chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Omg I'm confused. Sarah was Nora's mother? and what? Her mother has another daughter and then her daughter has another daughter and she has a son named Scott? God I'm confusing myself ?_?
popcicle-toes chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Oh! How exciting... this should be good *dances around bedroom like a gian pixy/hippo* I can't wait for an update! *hey! that rhymed didn't it!*
pneumothorax chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
It seems that if she was related, they would be alot lower down in age on the tree.

Sarah / \ Nora Caryn Angelo \Carmen Ian \Scott Meredith

See, so in terms of age, it probably doesn't work out unless Nora was born late on & there were lots of teenager pregnancies. Technically not related, but married in. Anyway, it'll be curious to see where you take this.

'“Scott?” I ask. Who the hell is Scott? I ask myself.' I adore this line :) Intruiging, if not short-ish chapter.
Mage Dudette chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
omg! how can u leave it like that! *evil, evil glare* n yes, was short...

nice twist tho, will giv u that. :D
roxy-babe912 chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Aw. That sucks. Now she can't fall in love with Gideon if they're related. :(
xfallenstarzx chapter 10 . 6/12/2005
your story is very interesting..a little confusing but interesting..well...it's good...umm...thats all i have to say..

peace

-caroline
SmartassHampster chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
it was really confusing... i didnt know if porter was noras uncle or gandpa or brother, and i couldnt figure out how she was related to the prescotts... it was confusing
Tara chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
This is very interesting, and I wanted to help you to hit your goal of 500 reviews. well I must go finish what you have expertly written. Best Wishes!
phae chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Oh... talk about major I-hate-my-relatives. Yeah, I have relatives I'm not that fond of too. LOL. UPdate soon!
bulletproof.cupid chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Question is why was Rand going through her anscestory stuff? Hmm yeah this will give her a reason to talk to Gid... and no I don't think it's incest. Update soon missy! Good job on this chapter... but it was really short ( Meh, good job!
afluver chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
omg no! they cant be related! thats so not fair! gideon and nora are SUPPOSED to be together though! they would be soo cute!keep udating though...good story
Useless Art chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Just a note on the last chapter, which I couldn't review on: wouldn't her father know Randy's name since Randy works at his bookstore?

Anyway, on to this chapter. Yes, it was very short. It was also almost devoid of detail, and you had a few notable spelling errors (mostly in the chocolate category). However, the plotline it introduces does add quite a bit of spice to the story. I can't say I'm altogether enthused that she'll have more reason to talk to Gideon. Unlike the other drooling fangirls, I'm far more attached to Randy than I am to Gideon. Gideon, while an interesting character, is kind of a jerk. But, it does make for a fascinating story. I really like the way you've revamped this. Kudos.
Lunar Ecalypso chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
OMG! That was a most unexpected twist.
DuchessYappingDog chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Aw. Oh c'mon! It's not like they're first or second cousins, right? They're like... really distant cousins or something like that. x_x
StarsignLeo chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
wait. no! so that means that some how it would be incest if Gideon and her got together? NO! okay. interesting. awaiting eagerly to see where you're going with this.~Mel
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