dude, i thought i was the only person who called people mr. dude. that's frickin awesome. i now officially think lucian is the coolest person ever.

~dragonfly

Nice chapter. Is it realistic for someone to go searching someone's bag though? I suppose if it was really really open - aka most things had fallen out - then possibly. But hey, if it helps the plot :)

"Yeah, Ella, if I wasn’t taken. I want to be taken, badly. I just don’t want to jump in with you yet. I want to keep trying." This, directed at Ella seems pretty harsh. Oh well.

aww.. i like gideon more and more each chapter

Hey! Interesting begin - doesn't sound clichéd at all ) I'll come and read more of this late, but seeing as it's nearly one in the morning I really should get going. I'll catch up on this soon, or maybe after finals. Anyhow, you're on my favs so don't worry ;o) Take care hun,

~Bubblegum

only one question: which song was it?

if you actually understand my question, go you. people usually don't understand my questions without the reiteration of its antecedents.

woo. big vocab day. yes...

ah! wow, that was really cute, at least, i thought so. it shows how much gideon really wants to go out with her, so she might be a little bit more open to him. i liked it.

omg i soo love your story! just let gideon and nora be together at the end okay? lol..well, are you going to do a chapter update everyday thats 2-3 pages? or like every 3 days or something with a chapter of 5-6 pages? thanks..

cool...a note! lol can't wait to see what happens next please update soon!

Hm. Interesting. Hehehe. I like this version better than the "I will get you" version. And you update pretty often, don't worry. Many authors don't update for months.

Nice chapter~ Nora has a rival haha

Interesting...can't wait till you update!

oh, so now she knows. hehehe. goody. lol. you must write more sooN!~Mel

Dont worrie about it it is a good story

Oh. Interesting. A nice new twist. But how will Nora take it? Update soon.

Paucity ... a weird Latin word. I like it anyway. Good chapter ... touching father/daughter stuff ... and I love the going through Ella's bag and the note. I shall be immortalised for ever for introducing those boots. Yay! What flavour is the cake? Angel cake with chocolate fudge icing in the middle, I hope. *starving*