Umm...what does quid pro quo means? It is spanish, right? Wow! Does Gideon like Nora? Poor Nora and she was alone with her father who is in hospital. I hope he'll be okay. Poor Nora how she can control with Lucian. Sounds like Gideon was worried about Nora. Hurry update soon.

She gave up too easily! I mean, come ON! What happened to her independence? Her strength? You're just sayin' girls NEED a guy for comfort! Not cool! She needs to find her backbone and shove him off! Anyways, it's creepy how he lords so much control over her. Like a stalker... Or a rapist... Or the men in the black van who stole my cheese...

It's not too bad. Maybe her father can be in a severe state and Nora can go live with Gideon and Lucian and Meredith? Just a thought. Things can go from there. I liked it! I hope you update soon!

This is just a suggestion, but maybe if you add more description or don't move the story so fast. If you need any suggestions or help feel free to drop me an e-mail. My mind seems to constantly be roaming and coming up with ideas.

Other than that, it's great. Keep it up!

Whoa! Beyond the fact that the speed with which you uploaded everything is nothing short of astounding, way to write a story! Still do not have your plot all grasped but your writing style is so good I could all but kowtow at your feet. Unfortunately, I do not know who you are or where for that matter, but I am quite impressed by you and shall be awaiting for what more there is.

more ...description on why she doesn't fight him off? i mean, i know why...but...i don't know. does it seem too sudden to you for all this? or i don't know.

my brain is muddled.

I've actually been reading this for a while, but I haven't been reviewing. I know that's bad. Really sorry.

The chapter wasn't too bad-dont beat yourself up about it.

I just wanted to say that last year my dad had his gallbladder removed too, and he's doing lots better without it. Um, yeah, I'm allergic to shellfish and fruit, and something else.

It's kinda nice being able to relate to Nora, just all those hours in hospital, watching all those tubes, and the nurses coming in to write down stats and all that kind of thing.

In that sense, it was a good chapter :D.

Eh, not bad, but not so good. Write more soon. Hope ur mom is ok.

I think those were e\really good chapter but couldn't you put ALOT more in it. Come on the other chapters wer alot longer than this and what's up with two guys getting all sweet with her now? Great chapter though

Gideon is intriguing.

Ma-an! This is a totally r-a-n-d-o-m story. It's funny, i mean, kissing some chick to make 'em feel better and then fleeing from the room? Definitely unexpected.

I think you're thus you shall be added to my Favourite Authors List of Wonderful Funny Authentic Authors. Are you proud?

Gid needs some ppl's skills lessons...

just keep trying. I actually liked what you had before. heh. well write more soon~Mel

cool beans