Reviews for Quid Pro Quo
DuchessYappingDog chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Wow. She really went psycho there. Ah you have the cold/fever too? I had it last week and last last week. I'm just getting over it now. Anyways, sigh, they're pretty cute. How old is Meredith anyways? And her husband is dead? Is Gideon and Lucian from the same father? I can't wait to find out why Gideon seems to hate Lucian so much (from that drabble you wrote) and why he's so bitter.
Carbon Slash chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Lol it was quite funny towards the end. Harley is scary haha.
XXX chapter 13 . 5/11/2005
As a former latin student I totally get the semper ubi joke. I love how you use latin in your writing
Twisted Me chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Wow your story is completely random. I love it. I loved your character drables, they were poignant, but i guess that is the point right? Anyway I like your story. Gideon is cute in a dorky kind of way, and i wish i knew a five year old like Lucian because all the ones I know are annoying shits.
The Bostonian chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Um... he's jealouse of the time his cousin is spending with a girl... so he DRUGS her father? I don't care how badass he is, nobody's going to risk killing some old guy and serving fifty to life just because he's bored. I mean, hasn't Gideon ever been interested in a girl before? Harley can't go around drugging the parents of every girl Gideon flirts with. While I'm really glad you updated, this chapter isn't really believable. I'll buy them getting in with the key under the mat and him storming off in Gideon's car, it's everything in between I have a problem with. And what happened to the GUN?
kaleidoscopeyes chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
LOSER! People don't just forgive people just like that...:( there should have at least been more yelling. :(
FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
spikedmango chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Complaint/why you may not like the chapter: Nora gave into Gideon WAY too quickly. Nobody gets un-angry that fast. Especially about something as serious as their father getting drugged. (*crosses fingers and prays the rest of this won't get cut off*)

Other than that, good chapter. Loving Harley of course. You can't kill him though. If you must be rid of him, make him move, and I'll take him off your hands. Killing him would be too easy. The bad guys don't always die, having them stick around (even if they move and are otherwise adopted by their rightful birth mothers *grin*) will make it more emotional: Later in this magical sequel you talk about she can get upset when it's brought over again, curse Harley and stuff like that. And it will provide some conflict between her and Gideon, and eventually Gideon can tell Harley to get lost and it'll be all emotional and you can have write an erotic sex scene between Gideon and Nora *ducks frying pan*

Hahaha, good work. ;)
WarriorHeart chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
I think the only thing I would change about the chapter is the last line. It seemed a little too light-hearted for her father's current condition...
Endowment's Seraph chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
it was good. not one of your best I'll admit, but still freaky cousin tho. kinda really freaky. lol. write more soon~Mel
Bellissimo Addio chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Actually, I like this chapter... I like the style of writing you have; wry, humorous in a slightly sadistic manner, and compelling. Like it could be true. Very awesome... I need to start writing a story soon... Lol. I have one, but it's a short humor story... I am a sucker for romances. _ Heh. Ttyl...

Mrs. MJackson chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Autumndark chapter 14 . 5/11/2005
That's very amusing. Could you possibly send me the link to the website? It got corrupted in your posting . . . my email is , and I would really love to try the site out . . .
Crimson chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
Very cute story. keep updating please :)(
AngelaSolis chapter 15 . 5/11/2005
I like this chapter ... a lot. Anything with the line 'Feel my pickle' in it has to be good! Priceless dahling! I dislike Harley already (sorry spikedmango!) and what I want to know is HOW he gave dad 10 x Percocet. Maybe all will be revealed, maybe not. Yes, Harley sure is jealous, but it's not warranted as all you've, sorry Nora has, done is be kissed by him once if I recall correctly. But yeah, boyZ will be b0Yz I guess. I wanna read more!
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