Reviews for Quid Pro Quo
Shaking Leaf chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
aww this story's really cute!

only a slight question, i come a thin, gangly girl is stocking the books while the auto-mechanic guy is the CASHIER? i'm all for feminism..but it seems kinda lazy of randy to be only a cashier while poor liz is lifting heavy books and so on...and what are the chances of all these beautiful people (beguiling eyes for all of them!) sigh..i wanna work in that bookstore~

cute so far~
ScarsxRunxDeep chapter 23 . 9/5/2005
i love it update soon
IntentionallyLeftBlank chapter 23 . 9/5/2005
...hey! are you?

...interesting...everything seems to be getting darker...

...I like it...

-With Love, From Ikari-
WarriorHeart chapter 23 . 9/5/2005
I feel so lost in this story now... too many flashbacks... to short of present time.
Aquafied chapter 23 . 9/5/2005
lovely chapter, interesting.

the beginning, its divine. i love how you start with different things from the past, it mixes it up nicely.

like the close, very chapter, wo.
shams chapter 23 . 9/5/2005
ok. im confused.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/5/2005
:( :(
Huggleskitty chapter 22 . 9/4/2005
this story's grown on me a lot. I can't wait to read more now!

Happy writing!Kitten
jade phoenix 819 chapter 22 . 9/2/2005
whoa...nice story! update soon!
IntentionallyLeftBlank chapter 22 . 8/31/2005
...hello! are you?

...gah! ...Gideon needs to make up his mind

...well, I love the it up!

...sorry this review sucks so badly...

...well, until next time...this has been an Instant Ninja Production.

-With Love, From Ikari-
pneumothorax chapter 22 . 8/16/2005
One point: the first lines seem confusing. 'I turn around when I’m positioned in the back of the ambulance, one foot up on the step on the back. I squint inside the ambulance and see Lucian on a stretcher with some male nurse gently putting an IV in a vein in his wrist.' Is she inside or outside the ambulance, because surely if she's on the inside, she wouldn't need to squint?
pneumothorax chapter 22 . 8/15/2005
The event's a little random and doesn't seem to fit somehow, but it works OK.
NinjutsuMaster chapter 22 . 8/11/2005
Where the hell did he go? Poor Lucian...*cries* :( oh the mystery :)
NinjutsuMaster chapter 21 . 8/11/2005
...I liked this a lot...that's all I have to say... :)
NinjutsuMaster chapter 20 . 8/11/2005
*sobs* No! Lucian! I can't believe it, you have now sent two, count 'em: two!, people to the hospitol in this story, it's dangerous! Hear me? Dangerous! :(
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