Reviews for A Deluge
Storysmith chapter 3 . 4/28/2005
Very impressive. NO real typos, at least none that I saw. You are doing a great job of introducing characters and all. Well-written. Very good. Kepp it up!Later!

Gata de la Noche
Marian B chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Wow, that's depressing...

A good start though. Keep it up.
Storysmith chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Aw. That was sad. You shouldn't write depressing stuff like that. But, then again, you're pretty good at it, so I wouldn't stop. There were a few typos, things you would easily catch if you read through quickly. Um...well, unless my computer has gone mad, there is another chapter. Right? Well, I can't get to it right now, so I'll wait. Good !

Gata de la Noche P.S.- Remember, you only have until Thursday Morning to live... :p