o good! so is devy gonna be w/ eric! plz say yes

Uhm. Prolly not. lol. I didn't catch the Devy thing. Actually. I don't even REMEMBER what I caught...lol. Cuz SOMEONE has taken FOREVER to update coughyoucough.

Wow. These flashbacks REALLY help. And she FINALLY admitted that she hearts Eric! Ow ow! I'm TRES excited! hehe. But again. It's still too early in the story for their being happily ever after. So that means they're not gonna hook up for a while or she's gonna end up playing confused puppy again. Gr. lol.

And I'm taking a gander as to that being Eric in the photo? I think I said that all along though.

Jeez. Now I'm really hungry! That steak sounded really good...and I don't even LIKE steak!

Really amazing chapter, though! But UNNECESSARY CLIFFHANGER. Guh-err. You're a meany pants! But I love your writing! Teeheehee!

Do you know what you should do? You should TOTALLY dedicate the next chapter to ME! As my birthday present! SWEET SIXTEEN! (Yeah, November 11, baby! hehe!).

But in all seriousness. A speedy update is mucho necessary. For this AND the Vixen Headress. Erm. YES! Don't deny it. You know it's true!

I look forward to seeing a little thinger that says: [ ] AUTHOR ALERT! New chapter from Tayln Gray!

YES. I'm serious. T minus (fill in the blank) and counting! I can't wait (have I mentioned how much I'm in love with your stories and characters? Transplant Eric into my world and bam! We'd be procreating like it was going outta style! hahahaha).

Oh. PS. Is there still more to learn about Eden's dark side? Or was that all revealed?

wow kick ass as usual i love it! cant wait to see wut u have in store for the characters!

Much Love

Michelle

yeah another chapter! woo-hoo!

~K

Hehe... It made me like you a LITTLE better. Hehe. I'm glad he will finally know, though. Crappy was to find out but yeah. AND WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS ERIC PRETENDING TO BE EDEN! So she THOUGHT she knew Eden first with good reason! That was just deceitful!

~Meg

Hm...Why did Eric want to pretend to be Eden when they were young? Did Devy (later) know that he was Eric?

The part with the collection of 'important' phrases (speeches) was pretty good as it presented her conflict between the two brothers. What was on the photo, btw?

Glad that Eric's not dead! Wonder what Eden's up to...and what happened to his thumb. Good chapter, update soon.

Awh. UPDATE soon missy.

Oh right. How do you pronounce Devan?

I lurve Eric and Eden! I love them. They are so cute. They are fine. OMG they like so hot, omg I wanna marry one of htem., OMG i gotta go...

I have read the twenty chapters, i have laughed and i have enjoyed reading this love story... When r u going to finish IT please i want to know who Devan falls in love with i am going for Eric! I know ur busy, but u have fans who want to read the ending

amazing stuff you have here. i couldn't find a typo. honest. XD. my opinion: i think she should be with eric. the scenes with eden and her together just doesn't feel right. when eric and her are together you can feel that there's something different. she's more comfortable. but with eden, she just feels cooped up and she wants to escape. teehee. i love romance. XD i just wanted to ask, would you mind reading this story i have up and tell me what you think? i'm looking for honest feedback, not short "omg i love this" reviews. it's called From Pauper to Princess. mmkay thanks! update soon. i winced when i got to the end of this chapter. "There was a loud, sickening crack as he met the floor with a knee bent and his head collided with the gym floor.". ouch.

Great chapter.

Very nicely done! Keep it comming!

omg omg omg update son plz i love ur story!

Hey! I finally finished catching up to this story, and I love it so far. Keep up the great work :)

Great chapter! Heh...japanese school..must be fun huh? lol. I had to take a cantonese because hah I couldnt say anything at all...sort of. Anyways if you want to read free manga, go to .org. The site is in french but the manga is in english. If you have any problems just email me at Other than that, great chapter and update soon!