|Reviews for Seeing Double: Rough Draft|
| insane in the brain chapter 24 . 2/26/2007
Oh, wow, you've finished it! T_T Damn, I should've came back to this site earlier... .
| clear vision chapter 2 . 1/14/2007
uhh, just to let you know, blackouts usually mean that all the electricity goes out. meaning the phones don't work. but w.e it's your story.
| dreamgazer220 chapter 25 . 1/5/2007
Wow. I can't believe I never reviewed the epilogue! It was cute, I really liked this story. I'm glad that things worked out in the end. :)
| youpin chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
| AJS chapter 25 . 11/13/2006
Hey! I'm Cantonese & Japanese too! :D
Anyways, one thing I really liked about this story was that throughout a majority of the story, I'm not sure if this was done intentionally or it just happened that way, but I was led to believe that just because we read a majority of it through Devan's POV, that we basically had a general gist of what happened in her past. It was actually a big surprise when I read through the entire thing thinking one thing and then later being corrected of something you already thought was totally for sure. It was a nice-ish surprise (:
I'm really glad that she ended up with Eric. I don't even like Eden's name (no offence) and sometimes his character kind of scared me. Or I don't know really but everything aobut Eric just seemed to fit so much more nicely than Eden's personality and quirks.
Anyways, good job (: I like the plot. It's not completely original (I don't there is a single story with a plot that is...) but it's definitely a shy away from some of the typical stories you can find. Keep up the good work! I'm definitely tempted to check out your K is for Catcher fic because I've heard some good things aobut it... :)
| UbiquityEssence chapter 25 . 11/11/2006
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 25 . 11/6/2006
aww that was such a good fic:D it was cute if not a little vague at times but that made it even more interesting so i liked it:D good job!
| Water Block chapter 25 . 10/19/2006
I liked this ending. I wouldn't mind reading more, but this leaves me feeling satisfied and all warm and fuzzy.
Happy that Eden has moved on.
Cute how Eric and Devan are. (Fitting that Devan would stay with psychology-she has had plenty of experiences that will help her connect better with her patients. Still. I was a little surprised she stuck to it, as she seemed to really hate going to the psychologist.)
Thank you so much for writing (And finishing) such a great story!
| Water Block chapter 24 . 10/19/2006
That was amazing! I love how you pulled it all off.
I feel a little bad for being so hard on Eden's character (Although he DID get a little creepy/obsessed)He was still just a big kid that had alot of growing up to do.
I ADORED how Eric practically pounced on Devan after staring shocked at her for a few seconds (Poor Devan, thinking he might have already moved on)
Anyway. I'm so happy I read this story! Going to go and read the epilouge now.
P.S.-I was listening to "I want you to want me"-Cheap Trick, and "I'm a Believer"-performed by Smashmouth. Very fitting songs. It was like a movie montage. Cheap Trick started as I began the chapter, and it had this cool affect; cause it was playing as she walked down the hallway, silently saying goodbye to Eden, and stepping to her future. Hoping Eric will want her as much as she wants him!
And-I'm a Beliver totally fit with this. All about not believing in love until they see eachother and what not. I don't know. I just loved the added affect.
| Water Block chapter 23 . 10/19/2006
Oh my god! I love Eden! (He finally grew up) This chapter was amazing-I espicially liked Devan's dream, that led her to Eric as her choice.
| Water Block chapter 22 . 10/19/2006
"Eric took a moment to process what his brother had just said, and suddenly, everything he had dreamed of earlier came crashing down on him in a wave of remembrance. His eyes widened and he sputtered stupidly for a few seconds before saying, “You remember?''" Did Eden remember the past the entire time he's known Devan? (If he did, I think he was probably always looking and watching, making sure that Eric and Devan kept a distance-or didn't get close, friendship wise, anyhow)
| Water Block chapter 21 . 10/19/2006
I loved this! HAPPINESS!
Although, it's sad they didn't get to see Eric when he was awake. (I'm really liking all the dream sequences. Cute how Eric pretended to be Eden, so Eden could get "closer"/be friends with her) Interesting that she can so easily tell them apart now, but didn't figure it out back then? Or, is it BECAUSE they played that trick, that she made herself see the differences between them, so it wouldn't happen again?
Poor Eden! He had to find out that way; she shouldv'e told him before, (I'm betting he'll be angry that she didn't tell him freely like she did with Eric, or before she told Eric.)
| Water Block chapter 20 . 10/19/2006
"“I don’t know,” she answered truthfully. “I don’t think I know anything anymore. I don’t know Eden, I don’t know you, sometimes I think I don’t even know myself,” she rambled."-was the use of Eden's name a type-o? I'm guessing it is, as there wasn't anything addressing the fact she called him Eden (That would have really hurt)
-Oh! I get it now. Sorry, just read it wrong.
She understood now, because she had been so stupid to try and veil it. She didn’t know whether or not it would lead her life into more chaos. She knew things always got worse before they got better…
But Devan knew now."-I love that you don't actually come out and have Devan think that she Loves Eric, just let it trail out for us to figure out!
NO! Bad, BAD, EVIL-E Blue blob! :( It wasn't Eden, was it?)
| Water Block chapter 19 . 10/19/2006
I loved the dream sequence. To me, it seemed to mean that she chose to be friends with Eden because she was afraid of the repurcussions either she or Eric would feel if she didn't.
| Water Block chapter 18 . 10/19/2006
Great chapter! Have to go and do math homework.
Loved how Eric confessed his feelings, and that meal Eden made is making me hungry! Chicken (Hmm. Meat) and chocolate (tounge lolling happiness)