This story I think is going to turn out great. I'm already fond of it so I'm going to ask you to update, lol.

A Tale of Two Cities...

She better not know... hurry up getting Eden back. The reactions! I wanna know the reactions! Will he beat up his brother if he finds that Eric was 'torturing' her?

Intresting, update soon.

Wow I love this story, it seems very exciting and leading to yet another wonderful story. Hahahha wow was the informer .. thingy on your hompage confusing lol I was like wait what shes going to fall in love with Eden or Eric! AH this is so confusing.. yet funny hehheh. keep up the good work sweetie!~Emmi

AAW! That was cute! i liked it a lot. . .eric actually seems like an ok guy, but i like eden too! UPDATE SOON!

Hiya! I really like this so far. You're right, the characters are a bit weak, still, but you're getting there!

Did I mention how much I hate you? And you know why! You would tell Amy but of course not me or Tonya...Anyways...they hate eachother and yet they fell asleep in eachothers arms.. quite interesting it is.

that was a good chapter, nice beginning. and since i really don't have anything to criticize... i shall join megan in bugging you. HOW DARE YOU THINK WE'RE NOT GOOD ENOUGH TO BE YOUR BETA READERS! hehe.. no just kidding, but not really. pshaw.. do you really think you not letting us edit will keep us from finding out the plot? heheh.. silly attempt kelly, silly attempt.

I was a bit confused about the names in the beginning since I always thought that Eden was sort of afeminine name, but then I got it after re-reading the thing 'bout 3 times. Looks interesting so far. Looking forward to the next.

Oh HELL yes! hehe couldn't resist... I'm still made about the beta thing and I wont stop until you stop being stubborn.