A rape warning would be very much appreciated at the beginning of the chapter :c . I know you post warnings in the summary but I didn't see rape warnings (or am I missing something). I can survive most angst thrown at me and mature content (or disturbing content) but not random rape from random strangers (at least there were no details except for the appearence of the guys and what they said in english x( , I keep reading cause I thought Kyan-chan would stop it or somebody would before it happen). Maybe its add to the story, I don't know but hey its been nice reading this story.

Seems a bit suspicious to me.. both have green hair..

Holy shit—that was good. :)

This is nice, heh, very beautiful

I kept on thinking of Rin as the house spirit from Honey Crush and the guy on steroids as Girochi...that creeped me out a ending, Awesome yuri! Loved it.

what did you did O_O

thise is to mach

Cool Story to this far.

My first story i read from this sait soo soo great.

I haven't read such a great fic in such a long time. And despite the fact this one has come to an end, it still leaves a mark.

Great work and I hope your future projects turn out just as good.

Kind Regards, Inquisitor-chass

Yah! Sounds really good, i'm going to keep reading.

man i wish it had gone more but hay what can i say story is super cool and fun cant wait to read more storys of yours you are a genius

Sorry I haven’t reviewed any of the other chapters; it’s just that I really wanted to know what happens next in this story. I know it’s not a really excuse but I just love this story so much and it’s sad to see it end. Anyway it’s amazing how the character have developed from the beginning of the story to now. It’s an awesome story and I wish there was more to it but for all the work you done I thanks for you. Great work, absolutely love it and I hope to read more to you work. Well that’s it for my review but take it from one true fan, this has to be one of the best if not the best story on fictionpress.

WOW i must say that ther is good times in this story happy fun sadnes i hated what happend to kyan chan it made me cry this is a story worth reading time and time

Ohh. I'd been waiting for this chapter, and that was just.. perfect. This was such a great story. That was such a fantastic ending!

this series is cool i like it a lot