Reviews for AI: Artificial Love? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Eep... Well, if you insist! Again, above-standard writing. It's not as depressing as the last couple of chapters, probably because of the action, and the fact that I'm turning into a sadistic person _ I was actually wondering as I drove home "I wonder if KT has put another chapter on his damned story?" and I get home, there's the e-mail. You didn't NEED the sex scene, you know -_- Anyway, I'll be awaiting chapter 23, and it looks like it'll be sooner than expected, now that your finals are done. :) Baretta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my GOD. First the fun and the sex, the HOT sex, and now.. now.. AHH! Kyan-chan.. gone? Taka.. evil, now possibly dead? Please please please update soon, this story's crazy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent! I want more! and i want Himiko and kyan-chan to end up in bed again, in the next chapter. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's still so sad about Ella,.. and I can't believe Ruki did that ( although it did turn out okay. So now they have to go home without Himiko, but they're still going to save her somehow... right? S Write more soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an excellent chapter. I love it! I've been waiting for Ruki and Taka to get together. Sad that Rin has to leave Nick behind though... Update as soon as you can, this is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Self harm...not the best thing to read when you're this depressed... But...I'm glad that it picked up in the end. Good chapter, but..I can't write much on it. I'm sorry.. I'm so...so...sorry. Baretta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job! This story is moving along nicely. I don't know why, but the 'group of friends with a few small problems' changing to 'group of friends with huge problems' somehow makes this story better. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... Wow. Very well done. The last line sent a bit of a chill down my spine, actually. Just the perfect amount and mix of angst, action, and suspense. Visualising it while I was reading it really made the experience feel real. Your writing is as magnificent as always, and I await the twenty-first chapter. Maybe a little comedy in the next installment wouldn't...no wait, write it how you want. Nothing will stop me from reading this. Well, all I can say is update soon! Baretta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier. Knowing what it was about, and then having my girlfriend go through the same thing on February 22nd, I really couldn't bring myself to read this. But, seeing chapter 20 pop up, I figured I could use another dose of your amazing writing talent. About the chapter, you seem to have gotten the aftermath of an event like this, down pretty pat. I should know... Either way, you did an excellent job, and I am going to read Chapter 20, now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh, poor Ella.. I liked her! ( *sigh* this thing better have a happy ending... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! Okay, awesome story. I love it! I can't believe what happened to Himiko, and the other recent events... but I am so frikkin hooked! And I have to say chapter 5 was fantastic, particularly cuz I never heard the term "jilling off" before, and it rocks. Fuck... what's going to happen next? I really hope you update soon ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is only one thing I have to say about this chapter...AH! You are going to drive me crazy with the suspense. 'Goes permanently insane. Doctors proclaim it to be the first case of suspense-caused insanity.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good. You've made this into an interesting story, and you've got me more or less hooked. |