Reviews for Castle on the sand
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Hm, very symbolic.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
i like this, it's short length prevents the rhyme scheme from being tiring. As an extended metaphor it can be applied to many things, cool work!
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
wow, i thought that was brilliant, all ur sentences were like perfect i wouldnt change for reviewing some of my stuff as well, and no im not french lol, just think its a beautiful languagexxCia
Lyrabird chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
hey dragoness! awesome poem loved it. wow it was soo good! i'm going to go read some more now!bye,cassie (thats now what i sign off as sometimes)