Reviews for Forget Me Not
Skiv chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
OK you get a review because you left me a review that didn't just say "Very nice, I liked it."

I like this poem, when I first started reading it, I didn't think that I would, because of the pauses and such. BUT! That proved to be the snazy part of the poem! It has a very halting flow, that I like, because, when you read it, it sounds like the person is doing their best to recite this poem while they're crying.

I also like how it kept correcting its self, or not so much correcting, but rethinking, or something, yeah, that was wicked. Just in case you don't know what I mean, it's in parts like this.

Forget me, but as you do, do not,andnext to one you love… more than me… less than me…

I liked that last one quite a bit. So nice job! *hugs*

Skiv