|Reviews for Vertigo|
| Listracian chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
lovely poem..I love the one word sentances very effective!
| crazybeautiful89 chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
very clever. i wonder if he does? perhaps. love parina x ps. please read the letter i wrote. then i can delete it. x
| Nev Jee chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Your flow is steller and your wording is eloquent yet simple enough to be clear. The third stanza really creates the image. Nice work.