Reviews for The Day the Office Floor Hurt
Runic Binary chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I love it. The intensity, the suspense, the imagery...it all fits together so well. Plus, the depiction of death was an interesting one (not only that she is a woman, but that she has a sense of humor). One critique: the way some sentences were phrased broke up the urgency of the piece. Other than that, excellent story.