Reviews for Fatally Yours
The Last Muse chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Dark and brooding. I like this piece. Poetry suits you quite well, if I must say. I'd like another piece like this, if I'm allowed to demand.
Wandering Oukami chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Hey sweety! This aws a really great poem. Did something like that happen to you or someone you know? I like your choice of words. Very deep. Love ya!*hugs tight* Ja ne!
dorkfish101 chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
This is a rather good poem. I don't know why you worry so much about it not being good. I really loved it!
Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
An intense dramatic monologue. The continous breaks gave me the feeling that the narrator couldn't quite taken in what had happened.